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-Governing the Commons by Ellinor Ostrum Table 3.1: Design principles illustrated by long-enduring CPR institutions
+As we live in a world that is entirely governed by markets, I find myself asking, can we make some of the world different please? It turns out that there is a type of managing resources that is different than the State ownership, and different than private ownership it s commons ownership. 
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+Describe a commons in Ostrum language here...
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+Describe how is a commons managed here...
 
 
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+Lets review some design principals used by commons across the world for stable commons, of at least 300 years. 
 
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 \item {Clearly defined boundaries}
 
-Individuals or households who have rights to withdraw resource units from the CPR must be clearly defined, as must the boundaries of the CPR itself.
+Individuals or households who have rights to withdraw resource units from the Common Pool Resource must be clearly defined, as must the boundaries of the CPR itself.
 
 
 \item{ Congruence between appropriation and provision rules and local conditions}
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  \item Establish problem solving strategies and conflict resolution forums. This can simply be that you agree to call a consensus meeting whenever there is a commons related decision that needs to be made. Ostrums book contains many different forms of problem solving systems if you need more examples. 
  
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