diff --git a/ScopeSequencing.tex b/ScopeSequencing.tex
index 6604a12..3198d50 100644
--- a/ScopeSequencing.tex
+++ b/ScopeSequencing.tex
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@
 		To those who can hear me, I say - do not despair. The misery that is now
 		upon us is but the passing of greed - the bitterness of those who fear
 		the way of human progress. The rise of automation has taken so much away
-		from so many, and the rewards, so far, given only to the few. As long as
+		from so many, and the rewards, taken by the Corporations. As long as
 		\textbf{we} have the ability to invent, \textbf{what which was taken} can
 		\textbf{not} be kept for long....
 		
@@ -464,14 +464,14 @@
 		Community and Free Information let us use this power, let us all unite
 		towards a common project. Let us design a free and open source
 		production system to provide \textbf{abundance for \emph{all}}\emph{.}
-		By the promise of abundance corporations have risen to power. But they
+		By the promise of abundance Corporations have risen to power. But they
 		lie! They do not fulfill that promise. \textbf{They never will!} Free
 		markets free Corporations, but they enslave the people! Now let us
 		design a better world, a world of local sustainable automated abundance
 		- to do away with greed, with hate and domination. Let us design for a
 		world of reason, a world where science and progress will lead to all
 		humanity's freedom. \textbf{Makers!} in the name of Freedom and
-		Community, \textbf{let us all unite!}\footnote{Credit: Charlie Chaplin, Reworked by Kevin Harrington}
+		Community, \textbf{LET US ALL UNITE!}\footnote{Credit: Charlie Chaplin, Reworked by Kevin Harrington}
 	}
 	
 \end{document}