repharase the call to action

ScopeSequencing.tex

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-	\huge \textbf{Building A Durable }
+		\huge \textbf{Building A Common}\par
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-	\huge \textbf{Community}
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 		\Large Security and Stability Comes
 		
 		From Working Together\par % Add your subtitle
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 		\end{enumerate}
 	\end{multicols}
 	
-\pagebreak
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-\section{Durable Communities}
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-A durable community is one that is designed to last for generations. The intent towards durability does create some limitations on the kinds of communities that you can create. 
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-By durable we mean an organization that is intended to have stability long after all of the original organizers have moved on or passed the organization down to a new generation. Members of such an organization should have guaranteed rights to access the fruits of the organization, but do not have the right to destroy or dismember the organization. 
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-\subsection{How does an organization have durability?}
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-When organizers create a structure that adds the design features of a stable commons. We can see a breakdown of these design principals in section 2. 
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-When decisions are made through a consensus process. We can see a breakdown of the consensus process in section 4.
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-When members have trust and mutual aid with each other. We can see a process for boot-strapping trust in section 6.  
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-\subsection{How does an organization lack durability?}
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-When members have a shareholder model then there needs to be a cash-out process. Cash-outs can destabilize an organization.
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-When an organization is transitioned from one generation to the next as ownership, there is a problem where the inheritors may not be interested in participation, and so would need to exit the organization. Members exiting without a desire to maintain stability can cause destabilization. 
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-\subsection{How can commons be made durable?}
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-Commons, if designed well, and governed well, could be a much more stable structure. In the first generation, both a commons and a cooperatively owned business have similar benefits and stability to the members. The generational turnover is very different. A commons will use the decision making process established to accept new members when a previous member leaves or passes away. Allowing the commons to decide who to include in future operation stabilizes the organization. 
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 	\section{What is a Common}
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-\pagebreak
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-\section{Why Build a Common?}
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-From the Yana Ludwig reading:
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-\subsection{Spiritual or Religious}
-\subsection{Cultural Preservation}
-\subsection{Social Experimentation}
-\subsection{Service-based}
-\subsection{Economic Security}
-In high cost of living areas, communities formed around economic security can be particularly effective at allowing creative and other groups to remain in place as costs rise. Communities can use tools such as income pooling, cost splitting, or cooperatively run business ventures to support economic access.
-\subsection{Identity-based Safe Havens}
-\subsection{Lifestyle and Comfort Enhancement}
-\subsection{Ecological Sustainability}
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-
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 	\section{What is Consensus Process?}
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+	\section{Why Build a Common?}
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+	From the Yana Ludwig reading:
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+	
+	\subsection{Spiritual or Religious}
+	\subsection{Cultural Preservation}
+	\subsection{Social Experimentation}
+	\subsection{Service-based}
+	\subsection{Economic Security}
+	In high cost of living areas, communities formed around economic security can be particularly effective at allowing creative and other groups to remain in place as costs rise. Communities can use tools such as income pooling, cost splitting, or cooperatively run business ventures to support economic access.
+	\subsection{Identity-based Safe Havens}
+	\subsection{Lifestyle and Comfort Enhancement}
+	\subsection{Ecological Sustainability}
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+	\pagebreak
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+	\pagebreak
 	
 	\section{What is Property?}
 	\subsection{ Legal Definitions}
@@ -446,9 +421,9 @@ Without these qualities, life will be violent and all will be lost....
 		The internet and the smartphone have brought us closer together. The
 		very nature of these inventions cries out for the goodness in humanity -
 		cries out for universal kinship - for the unity of us all. Even now my
-words could reach billions throughout the world - billions of
+		words could reach millions throughout the world - millions of
 		despairing men, women, and little children - victims of a system that
-makes us torture and imprison each other in either the slavery of wage labor or the destitution of homelessness.
+		makes us choose either wage slavery or homeless destitution.
 		
 		To those who can hear me, I say - do not despair. The misery that is now
 		upon us is but the passing of greed - the bitterness of those who fear